(58) That's crazy bro- FINAL Feature Story

 

This is it, welcome back guys, today I have for you my revised feature story, the final version! My teacher reviewed my feature story draft and suggested some changes, so I'll show you that first-

   My teacher suggested I delete the part were I say this is a feature story, because it should be obvious and in hindsight it is, so I'm grateful she pointed that out, it makes it more professional!

I didn't notice it before, but I was also repeating some information, she pointed it out and I corrected it promptly!

Finally she suggested I delete some of these sentence starters I use at the start of each of my paragraphs, and I think it's a great idea as it helps with the continuity of the entire feature story instead of making it feel like multiple small segmented parts, overall I'm very grateful for her advice as I believe it has drastically improved my feature story from were it was as a draft!

Now enough suspense, here is the finalized version of my feature story!

-FINAL FEATURE STORY-

A PASSION FOR FASHION

Men's fashion has been gaining popularity in recent years, as more men are starting to express themselves through their clothes and style choices. Tyrone is a shining example, he’s a young man who truly has a passion for men's fashion and a dream to become a model.

Tyrone's love for fashion started when he was a young boy. "I didn't grow up in the best situation, so to simply just be able to dress nice and look good while doing it has always been a great feeling to me." Said Tyrone, tearing with joy as he recalled his fond memories.

Now, Tyrone is in his early twenties, and he has turned his passion for fashion into a business. He sells clothes online, and he also works at an airport. In addition to his work, he also exercises regularly, which he says helps him attract women who can appreciate his fashion and style.

Tyrone's personal style is a mix of formal and streetwear. He loves to wear suits because they make him feel powerful and respectable. But he also enjoys wearing streetwear because it allows him to express his creativity. He expressed "if there is one thing I love it's dressing nice and having the luxury of putting together a good fit."

For Tyrone, men's fashion is more than just clothes; it's a way to express himself and his creativity. He said, "I'm definitely hard-working, and I'd like to say creative too." He enjoys putting together outfits and sharing them on social media, where he has built a following of people who appreciate his style.

Although Tyrone is confident in his style choices, he admits that he gets disappointed when his posts don't get as much attention as he would like. He’d say, "it's a little disappointing when I post this drip on social media and it's not popping like when girls share the same content, but I mean it is what it is bro, like you can't just stop grinding."

Despite the challenges, Tyrone continues to work hard and chase his dreams. He hopes to one day become a model, but he knows that it will take a lot of hard work to get there. He said, "if I did become a model that would definitely be a dream come true- if I got the right pay of course."

Tyrone's passion for men's fashion is inspiring, and he has some words of advice for anyone who wants to get into fashion. "An open mind and appreciation for a good-looking fit" is all it takes to appreciate men's fashion. And he believes that anyone can get into men's fashion as long as they have a love for clothes and style like himself.

Tyrone is a hard-working and creative individual who has turned his passion for men's fashion into a business. And he loves to express himself through his style choices and hopes to one day become a model. His story is a true testament to the power of hard work and chasing your goals. As he’d say, "follow your goals and keep working hard- because Rome wasn't built on dreams, it was built on hard work." With that final thought Tyrone has truly touched all our hearts and his story- his love of men's fashion is remarkable and in his view he gives a statement we can all agree on, "Dressing nice and looking good is always a great feeling!"

-END-

I hope you guys enjoyed the finalized version, but if you didn't then I'm sure the next blogs will cheer you up! And for my next blogs I'll be doing finalized versions for my cover page, table of contents, and double page spread!

But until then, thanks for reading!